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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I just bought a cheshire cat poster for my room the other day X3
he's definately my fav character in both movies and books
Trying to think what lessons might be good for you. I think some solid inking skills might be a good thing to strive for...
Here, i think this is what you need, hierarchy:
[link]
Visual hierarchy is probably the thing your work lacks the most IMO. The general drawing looks great, lots of energy, great shapes and flow, but ti sends to get lost in the final product because everything on the page has the same visual impact. Therefore nothing readily stands out and the major forms are hard to read.
For instance, in this pic if you were to turn the pic to greyscale, almost all of the colors and lines would appear the same, about 50% grey. If you want the figure to read again the background there needs to be more contrast between them.
Same thing within the forms themselves. The Cheshire cat's pose is a little hard to decipher because the outline is about the same color and darkness as the fill.
More on hierarchy: [link]
I apologize for delivering unsolicited critique. I hope you find my comments helpful/encouraging, rather than a put-down. I see lot of potential in yr work and I'd love to see you reach the next level even quicker.
Cheers!
I'm sure